Here I Am

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by CrazedMidget (Sweet fantacy's really do come in small packages!) on Sunday, 09-May-2010 0:14:17

Here I am,
Standing here before you.
Listening to every word,
That you have to say.
Here I go,
Just wishing you could know.
The feelings that I feel,
Go away…

When I’m with you,
Nothing else matters.
When I’m with you,
I feel like I can fly.
When I think of you,
My mind just seems to wonder.
Did I really end up finding the right guy?

Here I am,
Sitting here before you.
Beginning to question,
What is going through my mind.
Listening to every word,
That you have to say.
I ask myself,
Are you all mine?

When I’m with you,
Nothing else matters.
When I’m with you,
I feel like I can fly.
When I think of you,
My mind just seems to wonder.
Did I really end up finding the right guy?

No one really knows,
Who they’re meant to be with.
To me it’s crazy,
And I finally see it...

Here I am,
Falling before you.
Here I go,
Now catch my fall.
Here I see,
What is truly meant to be…

When I’m with you,
Nothing else matters.
When I’m with you,
I feel like I can fly.
When I think of you,
My mind just seems to wonder.
Did I really end up finding the right guy?

Here I am,
Singing before you.
Now I know,
That this is real...

Post 2 by laced-unlaced (Account disabled) on Sunday, 09-May-2010 4:30:48

love that. absolutely love it. great work.

Post 3 by Sword of Sapphire (Whether you agree with my opinion or not, you're still gonna read it!) on Saturday, 15-May-2010 21:17:12

Good rhythm. I'd only recommend that you remove the words from the lines: standing here before you and sitting here before you, so it goes:
Here I am,
standing before you
...
Here I am,
Sitting before you.

I think that sounds better.

Post 4 by Queen Latina (Zone BBS is my Life) on Monday, 07-Jun-2010 2:36:11

awww, I really liked this, Jess. Didn't really consider you the poetical type, but you did a good job. :)